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OH SWEETEST ONE WEEKLY JUN CONTEST

OKAY I accept your challenge
next one will be on a house wife ...
one who is nagging, 55,
most of the while...

your tummy is so big
'tis like you were in ninth month
your beard so grown
your shave a rascalian
gosh smelling foul teeth
use some sweetened toothpaste
wow
your nose you pick
like a chameleon

what errors did I make
when I gave unto you,
youthful mistake
all gals make

I vow never to marry you,
if I return your way again
incarnation

get out of my sight
give me your purse
divorce I shan't ever give
nothing could be worse

I shall deny you
all of myself
that'll be the best reward
you dare a woman man

now get lost
else the judge misery
does so lavishly award

keep your fingers crossed
stay abroad

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
old challenges
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Giving your heartthrob a cold shoulder due to one thing or the other is not the right way. Does he /she smells due to offensive odor due to health challenges or what. Maybe her protruded stomach is caused by illness. Whatever that caused you to rain all these abuses is not the right way.

Remember, you called her, ' Oh sweet one! ' So, why hurting her feelings?

Abusive,heartbroken, anger, separation, and hatred surrounds this poem.

Onyinyechi Cosmos

but this was a challenge
in poetic domain
like actors on the screen
differently remain
so why disdain
to be an artist do attain

Thanks for the sword
write in all kinds of bloodly pain
no love no hate
poetry is an illusory
funny emotional game

author comment

Beautifully crafted!

Onyinyechi Cosmos

I AM A POET
NO SEX
ALL IS MENTAL
BUT
PHYSICAL IN BLOOD AND FLESH
ATOMS ENGINEERED
NEUTRONS
PROTONS AND ELECTRONS
NEUTRONS AR LIKE LGB KIND
ALL HUMAN LIFE IS COMMON

SECURE YOUR MINDS IN A BONY CAGE
THEN NO NEED TO RAGE
POET

author comment

When you are in the mood for some insults, you can really do the job! Very inventive lines that would strike to the very heart of any female. I do believe that any woman you were trying to drive away, would either leave immediately, or wait for you to go to sleep and avail herself of the biggest, sharpest knife available and perform a crude castration! Bobbit-style. ~ Geez.
.

It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

Gee ur kid
ENJOI

author comment

Or scathing descriptors….

Leaves me in a place to wonder…

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