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OH SWEETEST ONE WEEKLY JUN CONTEST
OKAY I accept your challenge
next one will be on a house wife ...
one who is nagging, 55,
most of the while...
your tummy is so big
'tis like you were in ninth month
your beard so grown
your shave a rascalian
gosh smelling foul teeth
use some sweetened toothpaste
wow
your nose you pick
like a chameleon
what errors did I make
when I gave unto you,
youthful mistake
all gals make
I vow never to marry you,
if I return your way again
incarnation
get out of my sight
give me your purse
divorce I shan't ever give
nothing could be worse
I shall deny you
all of myself
that'll be the best reward
you dare a woman man
now get lost
else the judge misery
does so lavishly award
keep your fingers crossed
stay abroad
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
old challenges
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Jackweb
Mon, 2022-06-20 14:44
Scornful abuse!!!
Giving your heartthrob a cold shoulder due to one thing or the other is not the right way. Does he /she smells due to offensive odor due to health challenges or what. Maybe her protruded stomach is caused by illness. Whatever that caused you to rain all these abuses is not the right way.
Remember, you called her, ' Oh sweet one! ' So, why hurting her feelings?
Abusive,heartbroken, anger, separation, and hatred surrounds this poem.
"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
lovedly
Mon, 2022-06-20 15:45
sadness would prevail
but this was a challenge
in poetic domain
like actors on the screen
differently remain
so why disdain
to be an artist do attain
Thanks for the sword
write in all kinds of bloodly pain
no love no hate
poetry is an illusory
funny emotional game
Jackweb
Mon, 2022-06-20 16:15
Ok, noted
Beautifully crafted!
"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
lovedly
Mon, 2022-06-20 16:46
Yes yes yes
I AM A POET
NO SEX
ALL IS MENTAL
BUT
PHYSICAL IN BLOOD AND FLESH
ATOMS ENGINEERED
NEUTRONS
PROTONS AND ELECTRONS
NEUTRONS AR LIKE LGB KIND
ALL HUMAN LIFE IS COMMON
SECURE YOUR MINDS IN A BONY CAGE
THEN NO NEED TO RAGE
POET
Geezer
Tue, 2022-06-21 11:06
Boy!...
When you are in the mood for some insults, you can really do the job! Very inventive lines that would strike to the very heart of any female. I do believe that any woman you were trying to drive away, would either leave immediately, or wait for you to go to sleep and avail herself of the biggest, sharpest knife available and perform a crude castration! Bobbit-style. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Tue, 2022-06-21 13:29
BOY O BOY
Gee ur kid
ENJOI
Ray Whitaker
Fri, 2022-06-24 10:18
Tounge in cheek
Or scathing descriptors….
Leaves me in a place to wonder…
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lovedly
Fri, 2022-06-24 12:13
THANKS POET
RAYS OF POETRY YOU BEGET