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Observations of an Amphibious Creature

Submitted by Alex Tanner on Tue, 2024-08-27 15:54

Frog he hops,
Then he stops.
Tadpole sees.

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Workshop:

Earn A Poem Workshop 1

Contest:

Neopoet Weekly 08/25/24 to 08/31/24

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

Rula

Tue, 2024-08-27 18:30

Hello Alex

I don't claim that I'm getting this one hundred percent, but I always applaud the brevity that goes with a message and always assume that others are much brighter than I.
I thought it might have sth to do with growth and transformation,
Am I even close?

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Alex Tanner

Tue, 2024-08-27 18:45

Hello Rula

Don't think about it. What is there to get? It's just three lines. Be brighter than most, don't look for what isn't there. Alex.

author comment

Candlewitch

Wed, 2024-08-28 08:21

Dear Alex,

I like the abruptness of this poem...no clutter!

*hugs, Cat

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Lavender

Wed, 2024-08-28 13:53