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O! poet you
O! poet you
are you the Mississippi
the Nile
the Amazon
the Ganges
Thames may be
or
the entire Thesaurus
flows from thee
your poetry is
marvelly
sweet as jelly
and
like a pineapple
it is so metaphorical
like my friend
says
vanilla
he loves
it
for its vast
exhibitionisctic delivery
pulp and juices
an auusie he!
What kind of a guy
he
juss guess
will ye!
Style / type:
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
weirdelf
Tue, 2016-07-05 14:36
in a barbed wire canoe, oh lord
paddling, paddling, paddling upstream
De Nile is the river of all my woes
paddling, paddling, paddling upstream
cheers,
Jess
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lovedly
Tue, 2016-07-05 15:20
cheers jess
wish you well
author commentwesley snow
Tue, 2016-07-05 16:14
As always...
... provocative.
W. H. Snow
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lovedly
Tue, 2016-07-05 20:27
to see you Sir
back on my wall
is a blessing most hanker
believe me
hope your heart is now strong
a diamond you too are
may read this
as I can't post it
restrictions of NEO'S
you also know
Diamondic you
Superb
are you....
may you also shine
as I am a diamond
from a poetry mine....
you are far ahead
my lady/sire poet
far ahead,
than I can ever be
you are the diamond
in the sky
I'd like to be
One too on
Neo-poetree
Will I ever so be
author commentweirdelf
Tue, 2016-07-05 21:58
Write poetry
not self-indulgent shit.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry