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O my poetic masters

I am indeed grateful to
Jess
Ian
Esker
Joe
Judy

SHIRLEY ....married since gone
to make a poet from a
Dementic ever born

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soon I will be getting
a STANDING OVATION
ere in thesaurus
I drown
in the deep ocean
or am entitled to a watery
cremation
no,not burial

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There is no escape
for a fish
water to water
is a must
no matter how many times
fish change their minds
as in about turn
in an enclosed trough
water alone
for fish is a
MUST

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