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O Autumn leaf

Be not alone
all are lonely

somewhere in the vastness
of eternity
one calls out instantly....

still we say wait
time hasn't come yet
then loneliness
vanishes

unknown come
in one’s dreams
wow screams
where have you been
you say

'one now asking
an autumn leaf!'

invisible one
smiles alongside
now 'tis autumn
there is no surprise
hope you too will be
some day
flying about
side beside

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Free verse
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

Hello, Lovedly,
Felt a bit of sadness reading this one - comparing our alone-ness to a single autumn leaf. But there is also the feeling of joy - flying about side by side. Lovely image!
Lav

but all I compose is
IMAGERY
Lav you love it

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