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Nostalgic clap, clap dance
What a lovely dance you portray
nostalgia overcame me reading this
as I once held her close and tight
right in the middle of the floor
all glared with open wild and wide eyes
as they saw,...
I pulled her in and tickled her here and there
unmindful of the others glare
they all did smile and stare
then clapped as I kissed her
then and there
as a teenager
who wouldn’t mind
a Frenchy of any kind
as we left the floor
towards the door...
claps we heard from all on the floor
you have done me a favour
remembered our maiden dance
my first LOVE
now my wife
we still dance
as
life ages. on...
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Wed, 2022-05-18 07:52
dear lovedly,
in S1 L2 over came (overcame) is all one word
as they saw,...... as they saw... (an ellipses is just three dots)
this is a very sweet poem, is it a real remembrance? or created out of that wonderful imagination of yours?
*hugs, Cat
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lovedly
Wed, 2022-05-18 11:08
yes Cats rhanks
errors yeah and story half half ha ha
composed long ago
lovedly
Wed, 2022-07-06 20:03
where is GEE
Two lighter poems u haven't yet glanced
on the dancing floors
of my merry life