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no bacon, no eggs, home by no means was a fear of death

"Pigs don't have karma." she said
while they were waiting for the light to turn from pink to red.
"They're just pigs."
He placed his hand on her thigh
in his usual way,
The universe was well-constructed
that particular day,
better than most she thought,
abstractedly.

After three consecutive lifetimes, the mother ship would land
near the Mojave.
It was time for the creators to return.

Nothing can save them from themselves,
even their DNA was a tragic loss; their history
convoluted by too many saviours and not enough
lovers, the creator's creators concluded. It was
yet to be determined if the experiment was a failure
in its success. Too many
thoughts had turned to things; eventually things turned
on themselves as if they were preordained.

He would miss the planet, but orders were orders,
nevertheless and it smelled like rain. He loved its details
on his borrowed skin.

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This doesn't read like a poem to me. It feels like an introductory paragraph to a sci-fi book! hahaha lol

It is such a secret place, the land of tears. ~Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

And maybe it isn't. LOL.

Thanks for the read & comment, Blue,

~A

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BTW, the poem's title and opening comes from this fable/riddle.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Chicken_and_the_Pig

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thoughts had turned to things; eventually things turned
on themselves as if they were........

preordained......

Believe in your self
as we all humans
become wiser only after
firstly postmortem
then after the event
Bridger's included

thoughts had turned to things; eventually things turned
on themselves as if they were preordained.

loved

Too much of the world runs on *preordained* in my opinion. Just suppose, if *Armageddon* were not part and parcel of nearly everyone's vocabulary, would we be heading towards it at breakneck speed? I don't think so.
There's just too much might out there and not enough right.

A world that is selfish and only concerns itself....the few...the rich, the *chosen* people, the *straight* people,
the *white* people, the *male* people, leaves a world bereft of the sanctity of ALL life, including the Earth's.

~A

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It's almost given our society a fatalistic attitude towards the earth. Why bother worrying about global warming - when Jesus comes back, there will be a new heaven & a new earth - so who cares if we ruin this one!

It is such a secret place, the land of tears. ~Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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