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Nights Are For Lovers

Love poetry skips me
now I see
but your poems
and that guy's doing it tonight
gives me an inspiration
about all bridal like nights

no beloved at night
no life
it's ones' birth right
to fall in love at first sight
smiles in the middle of the darkest night
yeah in the mid of any whispering night

for there's no orgasmic life
without a lovely pulsating night
surely lovers must be bright
ain't I absolutely right
how about tonight

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Nights were made for fun ask an Aussie anyone
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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"Love poetry skips me"

I'd change those first two lines to that.

Love loved lovedly lovely. I love this!

Bravo!!

You've always had it in you? Both of us knew it!!!

Love and biggest hugs J x

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

sis
Poetree me

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I hope so.

Hugs lovely x

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

of course sis aussie

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This is absolutely fantastic!
.

"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".

~Jackweb

Jack

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Always are you evolving without really changing fundamentally.

Good job
Tim

Tim
Thanks evolution
like ''change ''
is permanent....

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How about doing it tonight
I replied to set him aright

He ran in plight
never came for another
night

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get enlightened
by my abstract poems
Never someone here does whispers
though deaf I can still hear

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