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NIGHT BECKONS
As I'm about to switch off for the night
my heart yells loudly
wait will ye all the years hence
you shall sleep
I'm your love laps -top
why abandon so early
I retort the eyes now droll
mind does roll
let me go off
then see me active
composing tomorrow's poetry
daily I keep waiting
can't retire
my inner voice is compelling
come
how else will I dream a poem
you want of me
So tomorrow I'll add on part two
the dream that comes through
HAVE PATIENCE
ALL ARE NOW SNORING
WHY should my drooping eyes weep
wake up poet
I disobey now you work for me
The night is young
time is short
in poetic melody don't let me get caught
I go off....
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
DREAMER POET KNOWS SHAM ALL POETRY
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Ray Whitaker
Sun, 2022-08-21 14:35
The best!
Seems like this one is the best (and close to the vest) of yours! Nice!
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lovedly
Sun, 2022-08-21 18:10
Thanks Ray
The best
nearest to my very chest
shall me one day adorn
peaceful rest
wish me the best......
lovedly
Thu, 2022-08-25 21:12
Am I wasting time
no second read
.....
Triskelion
Fri, 2022-08-26 01:51
I've noticed...
...there is more action here as far as new members and poems being posted, but comparatively, less responses. I like to try to give 3 responses for each one I get on my poems. The balance seems way off here. I swear I stink sometimes.
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
lovedly
Fri, 2022-08-26 11:37
nothing much
we oldies can do '
now none can we woo
lol