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The Niche (Around The Global Anthology Contest)
Nick the time 'n pick up a chair
Each with a master-piece to share
Open with minds, and arms, and hearts
Poets of talents, show out their arts
Old or young, you'll find a place
Eager for words; mighty and grace;
Touring around the global space
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Last few words:
An acrostic rhyming form
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Not Explicit Content
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Obadiah Grey
Sun, 2022-11-06 08:06
Very nice, and apt.
Very nice, and apt.
Well done, Rula.
Obi.
Rula
Sun, 2022-11-06 11:06
Obi!
Always great to see an old friend on my page.
Much appreciate the visit.
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author commentLavender
Sun, 2022-11-06 10:01
The Niche
I agree, Rula. Well done. This covers it all. Wonderfully clever, too.
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Rula
Sun, 2022-11-06 11:03
Dearest Lavender
Such a compliment from atalented poetess. Highly appreciate it dear.
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author commentRula
Mon, 2022-11-07 15:40
Hello Mark
Thank you for the time and your invaluable thoughts.
As for "niche", it has so many good meanings to it and I thought all are good ones and from the context I also thought it's clear I wanted a special space, a shelter if you want. I wonder what other meanings might the reader get in such a content.
Your thoughts?
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author commentlovedly
Mon, 2022-11-07 04:36
what a wonderful
niche
for lucky poets of Neo
Rula
Mon, 2022-11-07 15:41
Lovedly
Thank you so much
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author commentGeezer
Mon, 2022-11-07 10:07
I love...
acrostic type of poem. Nice job, until the last line. I would opt for "Touring over tomorrow's plan." It makes sense because of looking over tomorrow's plan, you can see where you are going. ~ Geezer.
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Rula
Mon, 2022-11-07 15:43
Thank you Geezer
I am thinking over that the last line and the title as well.
Much appreciate your thoughts.
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author commentRula
Tue, 2022-11-08 01:11
Please let me know
If the edits work.
Do I still need to change the word niche in the title after explaining it in the last line what I am talking about.
I'm falling in love with this word^_^
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author commentGeezer
Tue, 2022-11-08 09:29
Remember...
It's Neo-poet! You might get woosy if it's Neopot! LoL
No, I think you are fine, with the niche in the title, but it's up to you. ~ Geezer.
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Rula
Tue, 2022-11-08 09:37
Lol
Thank you Geezer.
Appreciate the quick response and the heads up!
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