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new years poem will be steamed as the New Years hangover.is overcome

Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2017-01-01 18:01

change is the essence of life
12 million years ago we were tadpoles and as sun warmed the earth moon showed the night path man multiplied at gradually increasing speed then as you say glacial I say we were like Alps and Everest static coz guys loved it then the glaciers gradually melted two thousand years only religion lay cemented then came Pope the 13th he administered wisdom in many since then we have had electricity and all its manifestations now in our times we were just sprinting 100 meters only now we fly at jet speed and are into S P A C E mainly reaching the far and furthest abodes of some god to be don't worry you will be on board to Mars in 1930 not slowly If they consult me i can send them faster but they will not listen you may some day one day they may

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Esker

Wed, 2017-01-18 10:20

Esker's picture

give me oysters on ice and shucksters hucksters instrument
ive had blaise caviar...
forehead rib...left to right
whats that routine
kiiss the ring..
but i do obey rules....
who are we to make new
fulfilling old wants
trump got in...whats to say our
next in line...brings back the
0ld testament ways..stalin
and hitler combined
gaulags for poets
and the malcontents
gas the unfit
same sex
and criminal
save a lot of money!!
reward the looters
rapists and schmoozers
its been so throughout history
the cleansing
and autocrats
bloodlust dicatatorships
russia ramping up
mid east with the fervor
beheadings hangings
of the sinners and
mercy killings galore
and war
just blow up whomever
you feel like
view it on utube
as you eat your pop tarts
..
until it happens here..
world is cranking down
the pot is simmering
once again
..
for now..as poets
let us sing
who knows
when gov eyes
pry and round us
up in trucks
....as did happen
throughout
time and time
again..

space..might be
the jest of our
worries...

until then..
write..create..
a single gov
hacker can wipe
us all out online

survival of the fittest
(and best toys)

;0

lovedly

Thu, 2017-01-19 12:32

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esker you are a world apart
yes thou art
history repeats itself
gas or no gas
Co2 will never be undone

gays rapists criminals laid all Kingsdoms
let history repeat
why should you want it
to be replete

esker you have the gab
take care
they shouldn't us grab

Happy New Year
you have dug out
shows folks do read us
about

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Esker

Thu, 2017-01-19 19:13

Esker's picture

buy a proper suit.top hat..silver wolf head cane
long leather duster...
a typewriter that works
black cowboy boots
buckowsi kept much the same
but i love his groupie pics
what a character
sexton lived her life..tortured
like all..
what would i do....
every so often i go on trips
with fam or buds..
happy to return home
my battered old bycycle
Hillenki or some old name
painted on the forks..
alexander...quite the charmer
he laid the world
built a kingdom
but no...
i write free..
probably have to claim
the income
less headaches
quieter life..
and they wrote..
im okay...
they were fantastic

i dont think they will
grab us..

thank u..
happy new year
as it is..happy

w

lovedly

Thu, 2017-01-19 19:54

lovedly's picture

I am well bred
eat mostly
apples butter and bread

jam
blue berries
purpled
or straw berries
red
am like an elephant
well fed !

Glad my Happy
you at least have read

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