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The never setting sunsets

The never setting sunsets

As the sunsets
Today I stand
in its glory
so many have I witnessed
ere
long seven decades since

Today I feel
all alone
bereft of someone
I could call my own

The sun sets
not in its past glory
it sets today
just as a usual story

I alone watch it,
in dying blankness
as it spreads
its rainbow wings

Come and see
along with me
the sun never sets
know ye

'Tis for ever rising
come fly on my back
to another land
Grand

The
sun never sets
nor sheds its glory

I am the son
of the passed
so many suns
who have
only in your eyes
if ever set

But here I rise
as ever before
come shine in my glory
let not your mind be gory

I will only smother you
with victory

Live like a legend
life alone
yours,
is a mystery

THE SUN NEVER SETS
know ye
yes says Loved
and now
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Praise thy woman,at length
God will be happy
as he has created
so many women

yours is the first
exception

Wonderful
beautiful
lovely woman

a life of a handsome
man

ask good
how much time he took
to make a poet
romantic one
out of you

a daring love couple
are you
God smiles
in appreciation
of both of you

author comment

....sometimes maybe you use words
that are

redundant .>>>>.waffle and piffly >>>as many say jungles and jingles draws readers attention

yes
or maybe you use them on

purpose...HAHAHAAAAaaaaa

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more than is my actual birth
meant worth
hahaaha
thank your lucky stars
jess is not alert
else he'd be curt
and
tear off mine
okay his shirt
he is no poetic flirt!

but with his hot
tempered tongue
he does hurt...

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