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My Poetry Now Tires Me

Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2023-02-19 12:19

I'm tired composing poems
which I read mostly
have been baked in the sun oven
they call
Time

even the sun yesterday flew in rage
over heated
wanted to perhaps help
reduce Global warming

Yet some places are being excused spring
at other places snow is melting
faster cooling the Northern hemisphere
snows being extended

Now I wish to rest and sleep
I have no responsibility
towards any

heaven bless those
who don't share with me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Seren

Sun, 2023-02-19 12:37

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I hope this doesn't mean what it is saying to me.

Neopoet wouldn't be the same without our Loved.

I would miss you old friend. And your recent poetry has been amazing.

Don't leave us sweetheart (((hugs)))

Love and biggest hugs Sis xox

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

lovedly

Sun, 2023-02-19 12:45

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TESTING testing testing
where will I run dear aussie
jeff will chase me
lol thanks sis hope u are well A

and thanks for your poem on or for me 'twas lovely

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Seren

Sun, 2023-02-19 12:52

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I'd track you down lol and bring you back if need be

Love you Sis xox

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

lovedly

Mon, 2023-02-20 04:03

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Thanks you are a great towering inspiration
you have changed ur AVATAR

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lovedly

Mon, 2023-02-20 04:53

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I can bare handle NEOPOETS
as half blind I am

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