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My New Year's Resolution

Submitted by Hon on Sun, 2023-01-08 13:11

To make 2023 a spectacular
New fresh start off

I fulfill my heart
with a sense of gratitude

That life teaches me
the meaning of giving

to live and strive for
the best that it can be

to learn and grow
receive the wisdom

look beyond the past
with valuable lessons

Embrace the present
with cherish moments

Spread the seed of love
and kindness to others

Count every second is a blessing
to ALL

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Contest: 
January 2023 Challenge New Year's Resolution
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Triskelion

Sun, 2023-01-08 15:05

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Will you accept suggestions that will help your language use become more English? I personally enjoy identifiers that reveal cultural language differences as it expresses diversity.

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

RoseBlack

Fri, 2023-01-13 22:01

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I love the simplicity of it. Excellent job

~RoseBlack~

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