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My new world is Cold

Cool it!
I introduced..
cold wine too

you enjoy more
when it's chilled
you look for warmth
in a sexy blanket
could do after drinks cold
but not few

then both of you can do
what you want to

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content


That first lines not working for me but it could only be my sleep deprived mind.

I'd have it like this

Cool it!
I introduced...

Then the rest of the poem, my oh my never too old eh my friend wink lol

Love ya Sis xox

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Have you ever realized since 11years
I've always listened to you and Jess
Thus I am a shadow of two....
old sincere but abs
now mainly
GEE and YOU....
So I constantly thank you
May you
''shine too...''
as I once
''shone ''
owing to you

author comment

Does the title reflect the wine or the mood? It is up to the reader to fathom. Warmed up in a blanket not cool; but then "after drinks cold but not few". Then do what you want to do.
This is an invitation to share a time with someone wrapped in a blanket with a cold wine or two.

I'll be in that! A great poem straight forward and well thought out.
Poets Hand

Do come back again
The night is cold
added on by cool red wine
then the desire to warm up
AH all love to do so......

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