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MY FRIENDS FALL APART
MY FRIENDS FALL APART
as Autumn leaves
like nine pins
stuck in one's skin
'tis better they fall
more shall revive
my inner memory
that once was
ere the FALL
New ones shall be born
post the FALL
what is NIAGARA
meant for
but a fall
as night does fall
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Sun, 2022-07-10 05:33
dearest lovedly
I like these lines:
as Autumn leaves
like nine pins
stuck in one's skin
you have been busy reminiscing...
good work!
*love, Cat
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lovedly
Sun, 2022-07-10 13:33
thanks
Cats
A poets mind should never be DULL