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MY FRIENDS FALL APART

MY FRIENDS FALL APART
as Autumn leaves
like nine pins
stuck in one's skin

'tis better they fall
more shall revive
my inner memory
that once was
ere the FALL

New ones shall be born
post the FALL
what is NIAGARA
meant for
but a fall
as night does fall

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

I like these lines:

as Autumn leaves
like nine pins
stuck in one's skin

you have been busy reminiscing...
good work!

*love, Cat

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Cats
A poets mind should never be DULL

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