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The Music
The Sound
The Feel
The Beat
The Lyrics
The Guitars
The Drums
The Band
The Engineer
The lights
The Air
The Smell
The Fans
The Venue
The drinks
The Music
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Last few words:
I wrote this about Music and how it feels to be a musician on stage playing in a band.
Editing stage:
Contest:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
RoseBlack
Fri, 2022-09-09 13:17
My happy place
Because of all those things...makes the hair on my arms stand up. The only place I can be myself!
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~RoseBlack~
Lavender
Fri, 2022-09-09 16:45
The Music
Hello, Herbert,
Yes...to all of this! There is nothing like live music, no matter which way you are facing the stage. Even though this is a poem about memories, I hope you continue to play on stage, if possible!
Thank you!
Lavender
lovedly
Fri, 2022-09-09 18:22
I know many aussies they listen to me
except the first THE SOUND
do delete all the the's
it may appear to sound better poetry
may see
merci
Triskelion
Tue, 2022-09-13 10:27
This is
a good start. If you're looking for constructive criticism, it's something that could be expanded on. Right now it reads like a grocery list.
The bread
The milk
The butter
The cheese
The eggs
etc...
Nothing there for me at all....well, maybe the cheese.
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
Abby
Wed, 2022-09-14 10:46
Good repetition. It's simple
Good repetition. It's simple but nostalgic.
"To fly is to fall."