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The Morning After

Submitted by Rosewood Apothecary on Wed, 2022-10-26 17:16

Meet new day with restored vigor
My heart is light and full of you
You start the race and pull the trigger
Your engine is now revving too

I want to dance now, soul to soul
You of course always agree
With sultry swaying, rollicking
Matching movements made by me

Now in dark of early morn
Before the sun begins to show
I sit and smile and radiate
Basking in this afterglow

Style / type:

Structured: Western

Review Request (Intensity):

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Review Request (Direction):

What did you think of my title?

How does this theme appeal to you?

Last few words:

I think you know what this is about

Editing stage:

Editing - polished draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

Lavender

Wed, 2022-10-26 17:42

The Morning After

Hello, Tim,
I see this has been a good day for you and yours! I wish Neo had those emoji thing-ys. I'd give this a thumbs up, wink-wink, blush, and of course, a big red heart. This is happy in the happiest way! Really like your title, and your final line is charming!
Thank you!
L

RoseBlack

Wed, 2022-10-26 18:01