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MODERNISING NEO'S GENRE OF POETS

Submitted by lovedly on Thu, 2021-03-11 18:03

For Pete's Sake
Eyes lips then peaking breasts
upon these three
all love does rest
then me at night
in the darkness do arrest..
thanks Pete

I repeat
all poetry is lovely
we must fly for joy
catch a glimpse of heaven's toys

gals and guys
to all my rules apply
a new genre forms today
with our humble words we play

be naked or nude
be all undressed you may
let's compose juicy poems
in our own individual way

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
I have composed thousands of poems Many under post guidance of feather hatted neo's poets.Mostly since gone.
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Fri, 2021-03-12 09:43

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thousands will apply themselves to the joy of poetry in your name! ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Fri, 2021-03-12 10:04

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But why do you get annoyed at me
Poetry is emotion
naked or nude or not
poets must be permitted to show case
u know
A modernisation of poetry
many may linger still
it's their will

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Geezer

Fri, 2021-03-12 15:38

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I just always see the the ego. I will try harder to see past that. Many times I do. Your clarity, when you have something profound to say and it is not couched in babble, is quite striking. Again, my apologies. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Fri, 2021-03-12 17:05

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I'm ancient
YOU are aware
and
this poem was written
when some youngsters threw bones
at young pets
they called them
while stalking women
But none the less
you are wise
poetically more experienced

I was going to post another
similar one
now I shy
and
you know by now why
gee stay friendly
you are lovedlee

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Geezer

Sat, 2021-03-13 10:27

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Just leave the ego at home, it doesn't become you. ~ Geez.
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