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Modern Meditation

Where is the need
to pray
nude
lying on the sand
endeavouring to cover
secret places

Where is the need
to meditate
cross legged

one can meditate
even when walking

Love resides
in hearts
the Sun has given one
the energy to contain
as long as one lives
there is no need
to show
artificiality
all are of same kind of
humans

just pray
let all come and bow
they may
not to you
but to the sun
from where you came

when you are back home
Sun will of course welcome
not only you
but all who were frames
of light and energy

Sun gave birth
in so many forms
of animals
fl-aura and fauna
and
evolved through ages
for you to become a man

when you were born
you were nude
why are you now
ashamed
be yourself
as you are the
Father
of future human

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A way of thinking, not that of meditation.
Some good points in here for many to see themselves.
Maybe meditation is to see others more clearly..
Hope your MMXX is going well,
Yours Ian ..

Words can build a nation

is fine
meditation is a man made design
to concentrate one's wavering mind
Ian

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no harm done half a battle you may have won meditate man o woman

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