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MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR ENROUTE

Submitted by lovedly on Wed, 2022-12-21 08:44

Another year
is about to sum up
in its own imitable way

each human as an entity
has his/her own part to play

I can only wish ye all
FRIENDS
FOES AND THOSE
WHO STILL DISLIKE
my work

The itch lies with them
of course not me

I have never ever
with anyone fought
Only happiness from heaven
as an ANGEL
BROUGHT

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Wed, 2022-12-21 09:27

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Merry Christmas lovedly, I am happy to see that you are more or less back to yourself. This has a lot of merit, both in thought and manner of presentation. Good work. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Wed, 2022-12-21 12:08

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all this is coz of the inspiration you give
and gave me

Don't limit my breath
let me breathe freely

I shall keep in mind
to breathe a bit slowerly
lol

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Candlewitch

Wed, 2022-12-21 09:36

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Happy Holidays to you, as well! have a peaceful time of reflection and celebration.

*love, Cat
*ever, eddy styx

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lovedly

Sat, 2022-12-24 07:14

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Howz the STORM about Canada and USA as of now
hope alls well

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Candlewitch

Sat, 2022-12-24 07:26

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we have gotten a lot of snow over the past few days. we have a guy for hire plowing out our driveway. Steven shovels the walkway. we have had to clean the packed sow from our satellite dish. I hope you are well? Happy yule.

*love, Cat

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lovedly

Sat, 2022-12-24 07:41

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stay well all will be over soon HOPEFULLY
Its snowing here minus 10 degrees

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Lavender

Wed, 2022-12-21 20:05

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Hello, Lovedly,
Cheers!
Lav

lovedly

Thu, 2022-12-22 02:33

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Lav

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