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of lovers

Love is sublime
keep awake and enjoy
whilst there is time
and youth’s fragrance
does beseech love
lovers seek day in day out
no rest!

then as the bottle bursts
times become worst
and age catches on
when balls become empty now

then sleep all the time
think of the kisses stolen
and spills happen
as time becomes old too
and to kick the bucket about are you

till then think not of tomorrow
there is only love no sorrow
if you pray with your lover only
both in each
nothing in between
then alone you both are lovers true
all else is mystery
know this too...
my experience teaches me
I share with you....

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Comments

i am definitely experiencing the seeking with no rest part :P i like this, short and sweet. nice write.

mag

when one hears such beautiful words
one cries with joy
be one a Neopoet
gal or guy
thanks friend
you make my night
as tis now
I happened to read it
my good wishes...
and good night!

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