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THE LOVE OF PETS

at least the dog
also has a friend
he needs to look after
both mutually

so I'm equally happy
with all my pets who lived with me
they're as human
if not more lovable
dear poets

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

it is so very true what you have said about pets. they become our children and family. I know mine have. intelligent and loving, too!

*hugs, Cat >{^*;*^}<

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at my age
now all are treating me
as the third pet
haha lol

author comment

you are loved.

*smiles, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

Dogs are my friends. Had one since I was a kid. got one now.

Lovedly, I'd make you into a pet, but you don't fetch and bring back the ball.... laughing

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send me a big ball
I'd kick it back
no teeth left to bite
any ball
lol haha
thanks
friendly poet Ray

author comment

You really show the relationship that exists between the pet and you in the line 2 stanza 2.
I like the poem.

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