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LOVE NIAGARA HAVE VIAGRA

Submitted by lovedly on Tue, 2022-09-20 13:10

Need to take a sabbatical
let oldies take a back seat
now the newer generation
after the swans have flown
take over the scene

Sun does set over all human fields
glory be now shared amongst newer breeds
let's them now feel
grass is still green
ere NIAGARA snows
prepare a white shield
relax if you need

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Ray Whitaker

Mon, 2022-12-19 19:00

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Do yiu remember the Rolling Stones song, “Mother’s Little Helper from the 60’s? Yiu piece reminds me of that…

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lovedly

Mon, 2022-12-19 23:42

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many may need the blue PILLS

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