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Lost My Horizon....REPOSTED.....

Lost My Horizon

Here I stand watching
the setting sun submerge
unknowingly emerge
beyond the realms
of my imagination

can I rise once again
I wonder
when I am all asunder
time ceases to be for me

where then in the cauldrons
of fiery sunshine
I was used to bask once

Shall I stand
as time does me raise
not a shred of drop erase
once which came in surges
now nothing emerges

upon the emptiness
desolate sands of time
I lay my entrails to be consumed
'tis my imagination

time alone shall never resume
albeit how erroneous was my thought
in the power of ego
my mind was wrought
now in the doldrums
garbage bins of everlasting time
my remains if anyone does taste
'tis time to recycle
Oh life

what an utter waste.

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Free verse
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Comments jump around like a I wrote before in the other place you posted this, (with a different title). This is a real gem. Tweek the grammar in the second (now the 3rd stanza) and give it a brilliant polish.


. like my lost dreams...the flood

THE other one said twas ok
NOW let's wait and c

I once composed a DANG poem for a western poet
he or she earned her dentures FREE
'Iwas happy...
it was a dang gift from me

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waiting for ur DANG

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..let's have a dang party! A dangaroo kangaroo are dangayou too! Say it 5times fast...!


. like my lost dreams...the flood


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