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lost and found
when we are in the womb we are found born lost for a few minutes
getting used to seeing parents and doctors playing with pets or toys found
adolescence mostly lost we are all lost in the huge spaces of north america
enjoying it but wishing sometimes we are bin Europe iindians are found
Last few words:
when adolescents arein their cars like wombs
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Not Explicit Content
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Geezer
Thu, 2022-09-29 13:00
I'm thinking that...
you need to change your format to make this a little bit more readable. As it is now, it doesn't make a whole lot of sense.
The one part that I see making sense is your last few words, and I understand that well enough. ~ Geezer.
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