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lonely nahhhhhhhhh!!!! alone only

Submitted by lovedly on Thu, 2016-10-27 16:49

Old guys are as single
as this singular tree
so many ask me why 'tis it
I ask them to say
Why
they like to be alone
they only smile and laugh at me
Poet is you silly
why should we take the burden
of progeny
7.5 billions already
come and see some times me lonely yes
but when i want to be
else I have so much company
as i want it to be
come along with me

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Editing - rough draft

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Esker

Fri, 2016-10-28 16:42

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but...they are legends.....they ....
hell..they just are...
we cant even compare
get the job done...
Hell Yah!
and they are happy..
kids come and go..visit
course a will with money
is there at the end...

hell yah..no body rides
for free..

I aint lonely..I crash parties
or start em...
gift of the gab..
I meet intellectuals
got enough polish
and glib
and just sit in the middle
of a busy park or
food court...
U know what..U look cool
or interesting
people come around
Pearls are made from
grit!
Empires built from
robust Kings and Queens

I sit out there...Lonely maybe
but not alone...
a vast intel web now
exists....
so reach out and touch
somebody..

Good provocative poem
You are twenty years
ahead..and U know the
trail...

thanks Lovedly!
Mr Wolf!

lovedly

Fri, 2016-10-28 17:14

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one with a gab
a flair
a Libra
born at midnite
when every one was asleep
Rightly! 13 10 1963!!!!!
could be

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Esker

Fri, 2016-10-28 17:19

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but my mom was a Libra I think...
my best right hands were Leos...
my work chums were scorpio
and I work best with Gemini.s

still having log in issues...
hope this isnt lasting...
wouldnt want to turn..

and burn....

now...would I..

you are right that I was born
at night...
how did You sense this!

and maybe the time I was
concieved.....
incredible...

I lived urban and country
and both worlds I fit in..
most people gnash
and create enemies..
I get to know computer
nerds...well hell.
everyone..
no borders needed..

thanks Dude!
Mr Wolf!

lovedly

Fri, 2016-10-28 17:31

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cancer is gentle and gemini dual .... mostly bi
and cancer and libra never gel wonder if u did with your mom but dad must be hell...
scorps are sexy ...maximum may be and leos slash all cancers
don't you know Brutus and Julius they were good friends
but Julius suffered
after him they named a month cancer meaning losers and Brutus LEOs meaning daggers
but Julius Caesar was actually born a Libra
when the calendar had only ten months ... It was the POPE 13th who scored off 11 days and made the basis of the current 2000 year's calendar we call Gregorian .
I know human beings pulse by reading their verse. at worse
Guess not how
I am a scientist more than a poet

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Esker

Fri, 2016-10-28 17:45

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figured U were a techie Loved...
thanks for all the input...
You arre correct..
I knew U were bright!

thank U!

mR wOLF

lovedly

Fri, 2016-10-28 17:53

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my upper scientific version
lets maintain privacy o poet

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Esker

Fri, 2016-10-28 20:53

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you are twenty years down the road from me....
meaning U saw the swinging sixties
I saw whatever the eighties were...
we are products of our time....

enjoy!

Mr Wolf!

Keith Logan

Sat, 2016-10-29 04:46

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Not where I lived. Might as well have been the sweet fifties, still, no complaints.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy
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Esker

Sat, 2016-10-29 13:08

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communities no small...have "members only" to the status of the big world
Glad that You did not desire to mix behind closed doors..
basements...cottages...rental units..campers..
probably spared U much!

but that world is alive and well
as it has been since
the time Christ walked
and till the end times
which are getting pretty
fucking close...

Happy..

glad for that..

Mr Wolf!

(I blame glitter rock for its homosexuality in seventies
for after that and Queen Satan really stepped in)

but U know....yawn....I could be wrong!....excellent poem!

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