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LIVE IN THE NOW
living in the now
you can only live
in the now
now
yesterday
has gone
as a wow
tomorrow
may come
but
not ever as a tomorrow
but again another now
so remember
the now
and
live it as you may
some how
just enjoy now
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Jackweb
Wed, 2022-06-01 08:30
Beautiful!
This is the message of the world, if we live our lives in the now, the worry about tomorrow, how to survive, how to leave a better tomorrow would fizzle out of our minds. We must be contented with what we have. We must appreciate life no matter how little we gain from it.
Very informative!
"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Candlewitch
Wed, 2022-06-01 08:37
dear lovedly,
excellent!!!
a wonderful thought you have given us and I shall apply it as my thought for today! thank you for this gift of light!
*love, Cat
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Geezer
Wed, 2022-06-01 10:54
Tomorrow...
I am reminded of a thing I used to say as a kid.
I am not sure if I made it up myself or heard it somewhere.
"Tomorrow never gets here, because when it gets here, it turns into Today
and when it is past, it is Yesterday. Nice little poem about how we should live for today.
~ Geez.
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lovedly
Wed, 2022-06-01 11:52
to all three above
thanks for the understanding my friend always said tomorrow comes only as another today ere he passed away WE never say perhaps what has been said before 7.5 billions already walked the world we will not be the last thanks all
history repeats u
ALL know