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Lessons to Learn

Never say a word
which may torment
then the result would remain with you
one of LAMENT

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Life’s Lessons Learnt

DESIRE Is the worst disease
it has no beginning

no end and it continues

never does end

till the roads last bend...

WEALTH .... no one says one has enough

its desire beats all Desires

human beings struggle
till one's last

add more, let me be richer

damn donation...

why do you want me to die poorer

DUTY What is duty, don't teach me

my beloved master should only be

happy with me

SALVATION This is the Finale of life

as you sweep I solemnly sleep

I attain Salvation finally

let me till then be

go you alone now weep

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when He speaks of the road less traveled
or
ROAD NOT TAKEN

HE missed a Nobel
but today he stands on first 500 poets list as
FIRST
Shakespeare is second
ANGELOU 3rd
PABLO NERUDA 4th

A space for me or you
STILL
left blank for MUSICAL CHAIRS ...
LET YOUR KNEES get well

AND
I too see
that you travel to me ...when I only lol .. tickle your knees
as docs do... to find one's reaction ...how I wish
Frost had later taken the Road Not Taken
and come out with an abs different poem

Well now perhaps it's too late for him
BOTH NOBEL AND HE
must be smiling
He for being Ignored and Nobel what for!
your guess stan

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