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LEAD GENTLY INTO THE NIGHT)
A poem for a Virgin
who was always afraid of a man
was married and
taken away to a far off land
she had none of her trusted ones at hand
thus I spoke
Lead kindly into the night
with hubby aright
be faithful all night and life
be a good wife
nothing and no one
but your husband is right
he will take care of you
only if you always lead him
KINDLY
into the night
till twilight
all your life
and I was right
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
lovedone
Thu, 2019-05-30 16:56
not many or any
have glossed over yet
lovedly
Tue, 2019-06-04 11:40
no comments
but someone must have read
lovedone
Fri, 2019-06-07 16:58
one more chance extend our romance
read lovedly
in new garb as
lovedone
transformation
Sparrow 42
Sat, 2019-06-08 03:51
Loved Or Lovedone or even lovedly
I find this one a wee bit sexist and having no respect for the women of this world especially those who are forced or coerced into going abroad to find that they are there to marry someone they have never met . Yours as always Ian
Words can build a nation
lovedone
Sun, 2019-06-09 18:33
well Ian you belong to he Roman Empire
visit modern countries
and
see how many gals are crying
holding unknown's
babies
so many don't know
are they crying in
English or Chiinkneeze
and how to feed these