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Last Night
Every time
I feel it's last night
they help me with
sea dishes
full of delight
my system packs up
ere its sunlight
I ask myself
where has it gone
what
Last Night
take delight me is still
A
L
I
V
E
for another
LAST
NIGHT
no rage
no fright
it may again
not be my last
what
damn
night
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Edna Sweetlove
Mon, 2019-12-09 13:01
Confusing
Were you on something when you wrote this?
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Edna
Poet(ess) to the Stars