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THE LAST FALL O WOMAN

An Autumn Come Home
You made me feel
as the young woman indeed
in the Garden of Eden
nude absolutely

No fear of Adam’s
spear
he was meant to sow tears

But youth has since evaded
we have been with burden loaded

The leaves and petals
have all withered away
come autumn now our way
smear all fragrance away
all colorful hues go too
whom, does autumn bare
as if she was another one
of his private ware

We all love to see ourselves
in a mirror
like a tree
abandoned of all leaves
wrinkles left only...

Am I not depicting autumn?
Autumn-ally
as it is now coming

A lover of naturalism
one time beauty
that I surely be

Wow autumn it’s me...

(Poem inspired by an old, really old man's poetry
He composed when his young wife,
became like autumn.
But still he loves her, passed eighty.)

SEE ME THROUGH MY WINDOW
I enjoy the autumns and winters from air conditioned indoors

the whole house is fully warm ---air conditioned
one can wear no clothes
on that's the charm
outtta my window every leaf i see
saying good bye like human we
the only difference is they don't cry
but just fly high up in to the sky
as winds and cyclones and storms come by

thanks pal for seeing me
now I shall wear clothes not tight but free
as night falls and most oldies are half past
you can also at your crumbling age here last
Come now it's midnight past

Autumn is Fun
see from my window

(AUTUMN LEAVES PART SECOND)
Ha autumn is again here
getting stripped and enjoying nudity
all gals dance about a pole
shred their clothes like dying leaves
who now show what lay beneath
stark bark
no fruits like dangling food
apples and bananas
no breast
nor busts
all taken away
before autumn arrived this day

Ah all oldies too enjoy autumn
as any one like you
dance about in the park
Semi nude

if trees can show why can't they
all ask me
the answer is get bare
autumn is here
do be aware
no shyness is needed

many autumns we all have seen
abs naked but very exotic
like multi coloured autumn leaves

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LAST FALL COMPARED WITH A WOMAN
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