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Islands

You may be an island all alone
in a tumultuous, unforgiving ocean
If that's true,
you're also a mountain
refusing to yield
to the unrelenting sea.

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Last few words: 
Something I wrote six years ago (according to my social media). My mountain has trees now, as life returns.
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

life ordered. A different perspective! ~ Geez.
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Writing purely for oneself, is the ultimate in defensive posture.

Deeply thoughtful piece! The 'mountain', 'Ocean', 'Sea', this is a strong imagery!
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"Poetry is invariably imbued with a sense of calm and serenity".

~Jackweb

Even though one may be alone, they are still strong! Great job!

~RoseBlack~

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