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Incredibly Credible ..... MY LIVE EXPERIENCE
The doc had warned me
notwithstanding other health problems
I'd suffer a Heart attack
I could hear it quite clear
was it just a warning
A year and half lapsed
I did not collapse
but one can't take chances
in such advance warning situations
A day gone since yesterday
I was enjoying music and seeing auditions on my cell
When I wanted to do
well you know what to do
my left shoulder suddenly did boulder
My heart protruded
like a conical hard stone raw mango
it was paining but not excruciatingly
as is expected
I hit my heart very hard
banged it like one does an iron
with a sledge hammer
the protruding outwardly vanished
I managed to resume my heart
believe or not this happened
No time was lost in the art
as I got up as a kid smart
Was it it
or my smartness that saved me
who can tell
None perhaps
I am now again as well as before
despite my age
believe it or not
(NO LOL)
Comments
Geezer
Sun, 2021-07-04 09:34
Well...
I'm not sure that I know what it was that you wanted to do, but evidently, it puts a strain on one's heart. Be careful with that! I think it could lead to blindness. Lol
I believe it! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Sun, 2021-07-04 11:17
believe it! GEE
Now you alone are the best judge
lol
lovedly
Mon, 2021-07-05 00:28
A BATHROOM
WASHROOM REAL VISUAL
LOL
NO JOKES