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Imaginary Imagery
Imaginary Imagery
Continue to bask
in your lovely imagery
why delve in misery
There is nothing beyond what is here
the distant horizon
but live in hopes to have children in heaven
all is your own imagination
This young bard
says no more
than what one ought to know
Life is here only
all else is just
illusive and imaginary
Time pass if you will
Who am I to in you, knowledge instil
'tis thy own will
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Geezer
Thu, 2017-12-21 10:05
Read this...
and I get the message. I feel the same way; I don't try to change anyone's beliefs. Believe what you will. ~ Gee.
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lovedly
Thu, 2017-12-21 10:32
I like yor comments
my imagination these cement