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IF ONLY ALL KNEW
Lovely nature is
and
sleep you will
and
this is what beauty of nature is
just see and stare at it
Very beautiful
We come from nature
we also return
back to it
then we merge
and
submerge
newer ones eventually
as new ones emerge
human life
does never converge
it just does
continue to surge
From a couple
male and female
Millions of years ago
we have so many now
all know
7.5 billions WOW
more to add on
Where is whose control
tell me loudly
softly
but answer swiftly
you all are know- alls
some do
some thing
say of your own
don't just parrotise
passed human tones
Use a brain of your own .
only if you have one....
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Rula
Tue, 2017-04-18 16:49
An interesting point of view
here Loved... IF Only
Thanks for sharing.
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lovedly
Wed, 2017-04-19 00:05
Thanks Rula
If only I can personally thank you
Eumolpus
Thu, 2017-04-20 18:06
meaning unclear
Sorry, i want to understand this enigmatic work. I'm reading: Human life never "converges", we just breed out of control with nobody in charge and I should do something but only if i only had a brain...
I need the Cliff notes on this one. Help me out!
Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings