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I'd love to cup your face

I'd love to cup your face
he wanted to meet her there
but alas

I'd liked to cup her face
and
each bit of it lace
with my lips
I'd love to trace

let divine set my pace
we will nectar all over grace
twill be at my place

when comes a fountain
it shoots like a gun
with ecstatic lover's abandon

we will entwine
like summer vine
in between integrate
two loving minds
yours and mine

now is the hour
we have together
love each other
not like another

you grasp me
my whole
let's be integrated
as a single soul
and
live a loving life
as one singular
sole
but whole

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Two lovers same girl romantic poem
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Hi lovedly, lovely romantic poem. Nice rhyming with pace and vine, etc. As usual, I find it too long, methinks it would look better if you joined up some lines. I know it's your unique style, but just giving my opinion.
Enjoyed, Gracy

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"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

it's always a pleasure to pay heed to your advice .
This poem was composed decades ago
when I was younger
and
wanted to cup her face gently/softly
as now one would love to hold one's hands affectionately
thanks

author comment

your hubby must have held your face
in both hands
as one holds a hot cup of tea
to get warmth

in your case love and affection
thank him hold his face once similarly
lol
let him also enjoy fun
rflol

author comment

you are GEORGEOUS==KINDNESS

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