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i now know

i now know
why many won't read my poetry
I came to know
all my fans have left Neo
but
Stan Ian Joe and Rula too
read me as a return gift just to woo
so that they are read by me too

O loved
who said
a poet are you.

even Jess
still silently curses you....
so now leave Neo
will you

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

Dear friend, take heart. You are the most prolific poet on NEO, and you ARE widely read. I have deleted many a poem if not commented given a reasonable length of time. Have confidence in your talent and don't look to the eyes of others. Look at UNDISCOVERED WORKS; you are in good company,

"
R. 4 J.Stan Ian Joe and Rula too
read me as a return gift just to woo
so that they are read by me too"

You do us an injustice.

pardon me please
for the poetic inustice

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Many read but few comment. None of us have the slightest notion how widely we are read. The fact that so few comment on my works is easily explained by my poetry being somewhat dry and thus fails to inspire response. Where I take issue with your premis about those who do comment on your work is that these are obviously genuine types who would never engage in tit for tat correspondence. Try to look at the world in such a way that not everything revolves round you. It may be refreshing.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines

Lol - stop chasing compliments gorgous
you know we read you - but superfluous comments are a waste of time
you get constructive critique when you write something worthwhile, as you well know (with no waffle :-) )

Love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

was just wanting from you to hear
howz your problems now
any lesser

i know you read me
but once in awhile
when i go over board in poetic style
thanks for you coming up this small while
hahaaahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
thanks yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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