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I, I , I , I will never know, who I am.






Do I exist ?


   Love catches the fishes on fire.

                Water catches their ideas.

                        Black, like the ink of my mouth.

                                    Cold because it's water.









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What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
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This is good Jakub. The style is mature. Was actually expecting a long poem because I was intrigued with the story, diction, style and all. Looking forward to seeing more of your poems.

It’s going to take me awhile with this one. It’s a think piece.

I’ll be back,

me too, me too...
~ Geezer.

This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place

I really like the formatting and the cryptic undertone. It really makes you think...


This leaves me thinking...
The visual imagery in the poem makes the reader to ponder!

Apt yet beautifully crafted with poetic reflection.

"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".


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