I confess I did not understand this in the first two readings, then I slowed it down. Tell you a secret. I belong to many sites, love only two of them and spent a very large part of my spare time on one of them years ago. There, I used to write like many do here, using little to no punctuation. I hate using it anyway. Just to quiet the whiners, I started using periods, commas etc.
Come back here for the third time (I think) now I get hit with people telling me remove commas, periods etc. point being, can’t make no one happy but yourself. I was able to get your full meaning here perfectly as I added periods. I’m not telling you to add them. I just had an easier with than without.

Having said all that, I loved this. You are truly a poet of heart, soul and mind my friend. You make me smile.

My screen name since 1995 and email etc. is Rottiestyl. I raised and loved till their last breath, nine Rottweilers. So my nickname throughout the internet is Rottie. I come up under K. Mulroney and Rottiestyl in searches. Its what I have been called here at Neo for almost 9 years. Weirdelf is the one that got me here. We met on another site and we butted heads but as writers, poets. never actually fighting. we do not do that. However, we speak our minds. Oh boy do we. lol!
nice knowing you also. love your work.