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Humour Smile and Love of Life

Life can't be sliced
in bread slice
life is one whole
a magnanimous task
all must butter both sides

God's wishes all sides till we last
from birth to death
then go beyond the beyond
where nothing rests
only infinite infinity and the three above
I said it

''Humour Smile and Love of Life''

THE IMAGINARY TOMORROW
MAY REST
at best
RIP
O HUMANITY
''Humour Smile and Love of Life''

TASTE OF LIFE FOR ONCE ONLY
NO ONE GETS A SECOND CHANCE
KNOW IT
YES
NO CHANCE
PAGES OF HISTORY
DO GLANCE
LIFE IS LIKE A RIVER
OF ONLY
A ONE TIME ROMANCE
on my words have some reliance

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

may I suggest? history was written by the victorious, from their point of view. I, myself, like to know both sides of a story. your poem has got me thinking, which is a good thing. I can always count on one of your poems to wake me from my stagnant thinking that I fall into from time to time. that is a good thing. I like that the reader is able to see through your eyes!

*love and hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

EVEN THO my eyes are now bleak
but I still can help others see
YOU do SEE

author comment

There is a theory in some religions, that you will come back again and again, in reincarnation until you "get it right". Who knows what lies beyond the veil? We do not know of those who remember, and come back to tell the tale! ~ Geez.
.

It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

'TWILL BE NICE
if you believe in self
I too am another gardener only
watering from my mind's fountain
may not believe me
Its OK by me
but SMILE with me
lovedly

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