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Hopeful Dreams

Last night
I was half asleep
singing my new song like poem

O Maria Maria Maria
I was doggy tired
@83 plus old age
could not come out of my cage
O what a midnight rage
my dreams kept me engaged

I can't recall
those words which come
if at all like a rainbow
from a distant horizon
blind eyes cant see

Will one day a Milton I be
deaf as Beethoven was they say
composed musical poems all day
was maestro of his own way

deaf as me may be
one day
Lord Byron
Milton Beethoven or Wordsworth
I could be

Shakespeare is to the world
so dear him as furious
or sans all
I won't like to be

But Robert Frost
I wish frozen as ice is in Iceland
yet most say
Pablo's duplicate
Ah!
what an exceptional sign of glee
Romance also oozes from me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Of human desire as the road turns into a bend into the darkness of a forest
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Hello, Lovedly,
Your poetry has a touch of all those artists and their forms of creative work. But you might say your work resembles a poetic Pablo most of all, with your genuine abstract style - always in Lovedly form. I think your final words could be a poem by themselves:

Hopeful dreams
of human desire,
as the road turns
into a bend
into the darkness
of the forest.

Thank you, Lovedly,
Lav

except that he earned a
NOBEL
none will bother about me lol thanks a million
Hope I will be remembered as a miniature emblem of PABLO

''Hopeful dreams
of human desire,
as the road turns
into a bend
into the darkness
of the forest..''

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