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hi fi

On top of the world
touching the sky
only birds and rich folks
can fly
and all know why

Poetry’s soul,
must
give life to words....
creating immortality

Deep within!

Poetry once posted
becomes
public property

so do snaps
if you share
so
take care
all poetic friends....
and snapsters

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 

Comments

your unique phrasing
on some of the more out there
lucid poems is interesting
persons outside the box
seem to have that gift
to survive
surmounting much
against odds and current
which change with political
tides and historical
aptitude
socialist regimes and
fascism

the wealthy purchase plots
of immortality
and the writers suffer
their genius
of angles

Thank U!

I have been outstanding
outside the BOX
notwithstanding

yet so far
I HAVE SURVIVED
freely
and
have coined many new words
Shakesperiencely
I will be like him
soonly

author comment

You have an unassailable logic and yet it is all your own.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines

each one of us
is an entity of one's own
you are no different
Sir KL

author comment
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