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Hi danglers

Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2015-10-11 01:24

I do not know
whether you have read this before...
But am aware
and
make gals take care...

that since guys see theirs dangling and hanging...
all day...
they want to with it play...
and
don't care who they address...
a man gay
or woman may...
in different congress...

they just want to shove in any one...
young old or man or woman---
just any one...
they know not what they do...
that's why I tell all...
INTERNET is dicey..
don't dare to make love at all...
it maybe pricey...
Many gals never listen to me...
till they carry a booty...

it saddens me..
but renders me still!!!

Hi danglers

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

Rhiannon1010

Thu, 2015-10-15 00:17

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i like this poem because it uses enjambment well and had a sinister feeling to it, flitting just under the surface. It seems to me that some sort of sexual betrayal or let down is occurring. I would be interested in learning a bit of background information or context for this poem.

lovedly

Thu, 2015-10-15 12:48

lovedly's picture

and I some how had an intuition
you must be the one who read me in this
well yes it's been a long time since

I read and compose on many poets
one is a guy some where an aussie
sweet very sweet and girlish
but sad that is
what is he
I,wanted to straighten him

alas we all don't see
our eyes become blind you know

if you say I did help you too
do say how did I so do
MAY BE I'D BE able to help him too

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