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HEREFORD ART GALLERY

Peacock in rusty steel circles Knife angel cast with iron wings Hereford Bull Iron glancing A winged mermaid with wings A wooden owl with snipped vertical wings Twins reading a book as siblings The face misshapen in hiding The ostrich garden girl pecking The flight of a girl skipping Bright red dragon webbed feet Walking the dead holding up lanterns The Scottish thistle just spouting The standing turning around looking Japanese warrior guarding The man in the universe star gazing The Sculpted head flower to spring Peacock in rusty garden circles Knife angel cast with fairy wings Hereford bull Iron Glancing A winged mermaid which sayings A wooden owl with snipped vertical wing Twins reading a book as siblings The face misheard inn hedging The ostrich gardening the4 grass pecking The flight of a girl skipping Bright red Dragon with fire fairy wings Walking dead holding up lanterns The Scottish thistle just spouting The stag turning around and looking Japanese warrior silver beading The Man in the woods star gazing The sculptured herald flowers spinning

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I wrote this poem whilst walking around the grounds and describing what my mind saw at Hereford Art Gallery
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Ziggy. I am Looking forward to more of your writing.

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

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