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Hello Aussie Sis

If only you were in real life
a Sis
I had two
today em too I'd never miss

You are a broad minded soul
to help the poorest and troubled
is your sole life's goal

Sis this is like a poem
I'm composing right now
after reading so many comments
I have known you and jess a long time

so I bow to both and say wow

At last he said nearing his end
he started loving me .....
then without calling me bro
he passed away you know

But I hope to go
before you even know
so do call me Neo bro

If I don't come on line for a week
sis believe me
I'd be over the unknown
invisible but grassy green cliff

Do remember this poetic-baby
in hugging arms you offer daily

All life I have never
ever asked for alms
only all like you
gave me charms
with wide open arms

I wonder what made a poet out of me
perhaps abject poverty
believe it or not I wasn't so born
from riches to rags
the whole life I did storm

Now I'm not that rich
except with bags of poetry
I daily endeavor to stitch

Hope many will read me
when I 'm gone
I know
you will hugging sis

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
A tribute to Seren... who reads my poems ...since over 11 years... like an era without an end
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

That’s adorable. What a nice thing to do for her. She’s going to love it.

Tim

Thank you you liked it too

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You cannot know how much this means to me tonight. To say my heart is broken is an understatement but to have such written for me. Well it's truly an honour. I cannot offer edits to what is a beautiful message. Thank you sweetheart!!

Biggest hugs and love your Aussie Sis xox

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Sis very kind
and only one of a kind
Thanks Bows
maestro

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A long low bow from me to you. You've truly bloomed when others are wilting.

Biggest hugs xoxox

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

tonight
even if these seem to be tears
of joy

Life is just a passing wind
at times from slow to hurricane fast
then it only just whistles ....past

The tornadoes
tsunamis pass
the wind chokes aghast
alas!

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