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gorgeous nature

Admire nature but silently
it changes colours momentarily
it does all eyes please
then comes the sunset
the darkness
nature sleeps
come enjoy with me
'tis, yes nature is
poetry

CLICK ONE READ ABOVE

YES THIS IS CLICK TWO ...Sea below

I am on a newer path
a newer vista to be
where poets just don't praise
to please
but hug to find a release
if you please

when one dreams
to be or not to be
and
when guys feel they are the best
then trust in me
post your poetry
I will see if ur
a poet to be....

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Such a lovely title - I think you have two poems here - Stanza one would make a really good poem on its own merit, the last two stanza's are on the same theme so could be made into a separate poem.

( only my opinion - see what others think first ).

I like the encouragement you give poets in the last stanza.

Well done Lovedly xxx :)

Love Mand xxxx

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for your advice and frankness
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ask Jess
need I confess
Also I am like a circus joker
no circus can afford to forego
no!

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I admire your knowledge and amazing imagination! Keep on writing my friend. :)

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