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GLORY SEEKER
He sought glory.....
end of story
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
With shoulder and arm problems I' limited to brevity. So here's the short poem of a glory seeking warrior
Editing stage:
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Comments
Sparrow
Wed, 2015-06-03 18:57
Stan
I shall help you to cross this street, and make a senryu out of your words.
I cannot rest until you are better worded and rested.
A shinning brave knight
He sought out glory, clean or gory
Here endeth his story.
Love you lots La, La.
Yours, Sparrow
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emeka ozurumba
Thu, 2015-06-04 05:19
so few words
i really liked this to continue unto one of your great writes,but if this is it I'm thinking mnemonic
alidzain
Fri, 2015-06-05 06:06
Stan
here's my contribution
He sought glory with his sword,
displaying courage in battle,
earning respects, land
and a grand title
but..
his greatest glory is not attained
by any form of violence
it is gained when he found
and fought for his woman
for no gold or silver can make a man complete
in the absence of a lover's caress
Alid