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Glass Slipper

Submitted by Lavender on Wed, 2023-03-01 11:20

Surely your poem
was written just for me

because

when I slipped it on
it fit perfectly

and I was transformed
into all the magic

I always wanted to be

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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For the Poets...
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Seren

Wed, 2023-03-01 11:58

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Sigh your writing of late has been superlative.

It's a real privilege to read your poetry. And a joy for me.

Brava!

I hope the magic in all of us rubs off.

Much love Jayne xxx

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Lavender

Wed, 2023-03-01 20:55

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I have REALLY enjoyed reading a lot of poetry lately, your beautiful words included. The inspiration has been invigorating!
Much love,
Lxxx

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RoseBlack

Wed, 2023-03-01 15:21

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Makes me think of Cinderella but instead of the glass slipper, she is wrapped in words. Beautifully done.

~RoseBlack~

Lavender

Wed, 2023-03-01 21:00

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Thank you for sharing your thoughts, and your touching poetry!
L

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Rosewood Apothecary

Wed, 2023-03-01 17:12

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Great job. The title and theme are very congruent. I like the brevity, the point comes across very clear despite the duration.

Awesome
Tim

Lavender

Wed, 2023-03-01 21:06

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I'm glad you liked this. And thanks for sharing all your wonderful "magic"
L

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Lavender

Thu, 2023-03-02 09:22

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So much to love and learn by reading everyone's poetry. Very inspiring.
Thank you!
L

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Entend2u

Thu, 2023-03-02 03:51

........give me more Lavender - but don't share them - just send them to me and I will write you whatever it takes!

Lavender

Thu, 2023-03-02 09:25

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Poetry truly does transform our thoughts, and then transforms us. I am enjoying all the magic here! Thank you for reading and sharing!
L

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Lavender

Thu, 2023-03-02 09:27

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I agree - words are powerful. Thank you for reading and sharing your powerful poetry.
L

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Candlewitch

Thu, 2023-03-02 07:19

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I love your title and theme! the message is so very lovely. the poem; simple and sweet. you are a breath of fresh air!

*love, Cat
we are our poetry!

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Lavender

Thu, 2023-03-02 09:29

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It's always so good to share the love of poetry, and I appreciate you sharing yours.
Thank you!
Lx

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