your poetry always knocks me for a romantic loop! it is breath-taking. the way you compose each sentence is an art in itself! it is like you breathe poetry. my favorite lines are:

Above the seas on cliff top high
We sit alone, a girl and I
Soft clouds above,Gulls wheel and cry
As we sit close, a girl and I.

thank you for giving so much of yourself to your craft!
*hugs, Cat

This was beautiful and sounds so fitting of a first time with someone special. Excellent job.

I just adore this type of writing; although, the ending is sad. The scene is perfectly set and the motions of this day are encapsulated here forever.

Tough luck finds us all one way or another I suppose. It’s been my experience with romantic love that it’s infinite. I can always love my wife more than I do. I’m running out of ways to express it. It’s so vast and addictive and boundless. Undefinable.

Gorgeous,
Tim

I really enjoyed the read - at once playful, descriptive and emotional. I liked the rhythm of the piece. In fact, I felt I was there - which might have come as a surprise to you both.